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LJ Anonymous Critique Journal! *3*

Journal Entry: Thu Aug 27, 2009, 8:23 PM
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EDIT: Comment problem fixed! It'll work now hopefully xD;

If you have the time, and have something you've been meaning to say about my work, then this is the place to tell me without having to feel guilty about it! :'D

Like, I make crap loads of mistakes, most I know about, but there are some that may have been bugging you for a while and you feel like I should know. Please please PLEASE take a look, and maybe try and help if you can. I'd really appreciate it :3


Other than that, this journal's pretty pointless! :iconohnoesplz:

Irl stuff:

-My birthday's on the 5th. *points to counter below* I'll be out down the highstreet looking for a part time job, if I can find one, that is! I'm one of the oldest in my year, so I should get first picks of what's available. There should be some open, considering they can pay way below the minimum wage for us.

-I picked up the results for my first Science GCSEs today. I'm really happy with what I got! ;A; :heart:

-Going back to school on the 3rd! Ack X___x

-My sister's buying a dog soon...I don't think she'll take care of it, despite the fact she works in a pet shop. She's the type to rush out and start something without thinking of the responsibilities involved, or if it's too soon etc. LAZIEST, MOST UNTIDY PERSON ON EARTH TOO :|

-I gotz a haircut! :dummy:


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P.S REMEMBER THE CRITIQUE JOURNAL PLZ! :hug:


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Peace out!~ :iconimhappiestplz: :iconroflcopterplz:

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:iconeri-ko:
Post pics of the haircut? Also, I can't critique because I'm not as good as you.
:iconeri-ko:
I looked through your gallery real quick, I don't really see anything worth mentioning other than your anime looks a little wonky. @A@ If you had ANY PROBLEMS at all it would be in oversimplified BGs.

Here's the good:

You're perspective is flawless, albeit a bit exaggerated sometimes. You follow all the rules of anatomy from the eyes being the midpoint of the head or the bodies being 6-8 heads tall (8 for model height, 6 for border-line midget). If anything all you could improve on is adding more detail, but you're already pwnsome for your age.
:icon5th-ninth-993:
LOL I'm like the least photogenic person evar~ :noes: I do want an ID pic though, so I might aswell get it over and done with. If worst comes to worst I'll just cover my face up or something xD

AND. I. DISAGREE D< You're amazing man, don't lie! :la: :heart:

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:iconeri-ko:
Not lying, if I'm amazing then you're amazing x ∞
:iconeri-ko:
Also you draw better then I hope to be. orz
:icon5th-ninth-993:
Thank you so much for that! This is how it should be done! *___* :heart: I might post this as an example!

One thing though, I haven't drawn anime in about a year, and I don't really want to start again. Don't get me wrong, I don't find anything wrong with the anime/manga style, but it's just not where my passion is right now :( (I can still appreciate when it's done well though! :'D :heart: *stares at your gallery* ) It's like...in my past *3* Unless...........


OH SHI- Does my work look anime-ish, even now? D: I did not know that....see, this is the good thing about critique - my eyes have been opened!

And I totally agree aboout the proportions! *__* I've found a really good book, and I'm aiming to focus on the proportion section of it first, before moving onto the detailed explanations of the individual parts of the body. Also..I've been doing alot of quick figure studies everyday for the past week to try and combat my n00bism. Each sketch was kept to a 60 second time limit, and I've filled my new sketchbook about half way already with them.

HOWEVER, I know this doesn't mean it'll make me any better. If anything, I might run the risk of becoming superefficient at doing it wrong. MUST FOCUS!! \o/ *headdesk*

Thanks again for writing this! :iconiluplz: :icongwomp:

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:icon5th-ninth-993:
And I agree about the overtly simplified backgrounds too! *_____* I really need to attempt just a pure environment scene to really get going with the practice of it. Also with perspective too, cause I fail so hard at that it's not even funny! @__@

Thanks again real quick! :heart: <333

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:iconhappyleech:
I was going to...but then it told me that you'd dsabled anonymous posting! :iconohnoseplz:
How am I supposed to be anonymous when you tell me I can't?!?!?!

You are a confusing journaler with amazing skills. =3=

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:icon5th-ninth-993:
OMG, what? DD: *goes to fix right away* Holy crap, thanks for telling me. I thought I set it to anonymous posting only. Crap I must have disabled it instead. X__x *fail* Hang on a minute! xDDD

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